Purlem Personal URL Marketing

Cruise PURL

    I created this demo personalized URL page  for a client that is going to be pitching the technology to Cruise Ships.  Thoughts? Comments?

    You can view the site here: http://cruisepurl.com/Mike.Jones

    Personalized URL (PURL) example cruise

      • http://www.OneofakindPublishing.com Anita Windisman

        Hi Marty -

        A great start! Clean interface. Bold image. A suggestion, if I may (and because you asked):

        Copy could be more relevant: Picture yourself vacationing on this cruise ship.

        We welcome you to complete the form to claim your complimentary champagne and to find out more about tropical destinations.

        (notice the correct spelling of “champagne”)

        Nice work!

        Anita

      • http://www.purlem.com Martin Thomas

        Hi Anita.. I loved the suggestions and updated the site:
        http://cruisepurl.com/Mike.Jones

      • http://www.OneofakindPublishing.com Anita Windisman

        That was fast! Nicely done Martin!

        Anita